Leo85
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 | | Subject: Dev Request :/ Fri Jun 10, 2011 2:18 pm | |
| Animootionhttp://ssb4.forumotion.com/t954-the-red-guy-mario-s-here Spriting/Editing Story WritingOne day, something weird happened, everything was backwards. Everything was working weird. It was hard to do anything, so people had to wait. And in the next day everything was fixed. People were thinking of who did it, but no answer was found. | |
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Alt_0223
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| | Subject: Re: Dev Request :/ Fri Jun 10, 2011 2:52 pm | |
| You honestly couldn't even bother to put the slightest bit of effort into that story? | |
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Leo85
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| | Subject: Re: Dev Request :/ Fri Jun 10, 2011 2:58 pm | |
| - Alt_0223 wrote:
- You honestly couldn't even bother to put the slightest bit of effort into that story?
I suck at stories. :/ EDIT: Lock this topic, the story sucks. | |
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Alt_0223
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| | Subject: Re: Dev Request :/ Fri Jun 10, 2011 3:03 pm | |
| - Leo85 wrote:
- Alt_0223 wrote:
- You honestly couldn't even bother to put the slightest bit of effort into that story?
I suck at stories. :/ At least add some development of a story. You can't leave it resolved like that, and that lacking of any form of a description. at least go slightly in depth of the storyline, instead of using general terms like "some people." Use separate names, describe even where these people came from, or their experience with this mysterious idea. It sounds like it could be a cool story, as long as you start putting more effort in. | |
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Yuchikuto
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| | Subject: Re: Dev Request :/ Fri Jun 10, 2011 3:10 pm | |
| - Leo85 wrote:
- Alt_0223 wrote:
- You honestly couldn't even bother to put the slightest bit of effort into that story?
I suck at stories. :/
EDIT: Lock this topic, the story sucks. You should try fixing the story instead of just giving up. Try Bobby's suggestion and either fix the story, or take some time to think of a new one. | |
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Leo85
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| | Subject: Re: Dev Request :/ Fri Jun 10, 2011 3:13 pm | |
| - Yuchikuto wrote:
- Leo85 wrote:
- Alt_0223 wrote:
- You honestly couldn't even bother to put the slightest bit of effort into that story?
I suck at stories. :/
EDIT: Lock this topic, the story sucks.
You should try fixing the story instead of just giving up. Try Bobby's suggestion and either fix the story, or take some time to think of a new one. I prefer giving up than trying, lock this topic please. | |
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Yuchikuto
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| | Subject: Re: Dev Request :/ Fri Jun 10, 2011 4:04 pm | |
| As you wish :/.
Locked and moved. | |
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